You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
1. Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
2. Say how your work could be done while you are away
3. Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir
I am one of the employees of your prestigious company from the past six years. I am pending down this letter in connection with my six month internship in Alex Interprises Singapore which is the main office or of our company.
Last month, in the newspaper I came across an advertisement regarding six month job under the CEO himself in which he will explain strategies and techniques to boost the sales which can be proved very valuable for our company as well I applied to it and luckily got in as well which I perceive can make a world of difference in enhancing not only mine but also our companies success. Apart from this, besides working there, I assure you that my work here will not suffer as all of my work is online. Additionally, I will also actively participate in meetings and conferences through zoom calls to cope up with my current job.
Moreover, I will be really grateful, if you being the manager of our industry, can consult some of your friends there to arrange my accommodation.
I look forward for your quick response.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely
Arshdeep Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...ss an advertisement regarding six month job under the CEO himself in which he will ...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng you in anticipation. Yours sincerely Arshdeep Kaur.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72959183673 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79220575047 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658163265306 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.264484017 44.8134815571 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 4.34317383033 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289233564736 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109529913469 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462848066902 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138470019471 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045594818386 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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