It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relationships and communication.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As contemporary digital devices have become an indispensable part of our daily routine, many people widely blame that family relationships and communication will be broken down because of such advances. In my opinion, I completely concur with this statement.
On the one hand, despite the huge advantages that technological development offers to human life, they could unconsciously make the kinship superficial. To be more specific, the family relationship is generally built and strengthened on valuable emotions and memories which are created by numerous experiences and challenges that are shared by each member. However, the presence of technology has occupied most of the spare time of modern families, which means family members would spend less time on family activities, such as gathering at night to share their stories and struggles or organizing a family reunion with different generations. Accordingly, their senses of kinship may be significantly declined and weaker over time.
On the other hand, technological advances also lower the quality of family communication. This is because the current development of technology allows us to communicate through thousand of online applications and platforms, such as Facebook and Skype, which indirectly decrease face-to-face conversations and interactions. This could be convenient and efficient at first since people can communicate without worrying about physical distance. Nevertheless, in a long term, a breakdown in conversation could happen because people cannot recognize others' emotions and situations hidden behind the virtual screen.
In conclusion, I totally agree that the development of technology could weaker and break family relationships and communication. Therefore, people should be more cautious and notice its impaction on the connection between family members.
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| 2020-11-14 | happycathappy | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88847583643 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25542325549 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9077871548 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26896894531 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896796958209 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594279113415 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161208125552 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295135008823 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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