Questions: In many places, students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school. Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning, but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the morning would be better for students. Which view do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In a wave of fast development of society, more and more teenagers are required to receive education with higher quality than before. Most places in order to achieve the goal, students are required to reach school so early in the morning. Some people believe that it can allow students to own more time to study and gain more knowledge. But on the oppose side, other people think it is better for student to attend school later. Personally, I suggest that starting the school day later is better.
To begin with, students are able to have a full sleep. It is helpful and necessary for students to have a sufficient sleep due to the fact that enough sleep can provide students a better state to join the whole day studying, which can support learning efficiently. Owing to the situation, the researchers begin to make a investigate for students who study at these shools via monitoring the activity of their brain and asking they some questions. As result, the data of examining brain activity indicates that 84% of sujects’ brain activity are lower than standard level. And also by asking questions, a large part of students expressed that they are always tending to sleep since the school required them to attend early. By contrest, vast students at other schools that don’t have these requirements are in possission of high brain activity.
In addition, arriving school later is also offering a good opportunity for students to do exercises in the morning. When geting up from bed, students offen don’t be hurry up for eating and then rushing to school. They are able to enjoy their brackfast and using the rest of time to do sports. In the overwheming society, even students cannot own lesure time to do sports except P.E.. Taking my own example, during the first year in the middle school, it allowed all students to reach school and attend to study very early. And at that time, everyday I got up earlier even than my parents, and them rushed to my school to avoid being late. Since the begining of getting in the school, my health was treatened consinueously. Finally, I got great ill. After that, I transported to another school which don’t have requirement for students to attend school early. Thus, due to the habit of getting up before, I can save a number of time to do exercise to strengthen my physical health.
Finally, it is true that there are a lot of advantages to attend to school earlier. One of them is that attending to school early surely allow students to enter the learning state. However, even though they start to study early in school, the more problems also will be produced such as lack of energy and motivation to enter the learning state really instead of only on surface. Thus, attending to school later make students make a well preperation to begin during the whole day study.
In the nutshell, the masteries of perticipating in school learning later override further than attending to school early.Obviously, study is life-long process. Therefore, not only from angle of studying, but on the aspect of physical health both can be ensured by going to school later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o study and gain more knowledge. But on the oppose side, other people think it is better f...
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...arting the school day later is better. To begin with, students are able to have...
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... in possission of high brain activity. In addition, arriving school later is al...
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... own lesure time to do sports except P.E.. Taking my own example, during the first...
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...cise to strengthen my physical health. Finally, it is true that there are a lot...
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... further than attending to school early.Obviously, study is life-long process. Therefore,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 94.0 52.1666666667 180% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81495327103 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56562466205 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461682242991 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4684842406 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4074074074 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8148148148 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.74074074074 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396656160309 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114911726611 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787243779272 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236097185502 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703032401742 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.