Sports play a huge part in keeping one fit and to build character and it also has a huge entertainment value. Some sport events such as a soccer often accompanied by violence and other forms of antisocial behavior, are raising questions like can teams sports be good for us if they are causing antisocial behavior. Sporting events have both good and bad in them and in the paragraphs I will explain why I think the goods out way the bad.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that sports helps one keep a track of fitness in his or her life. For example, heavy sports such as cricket, football, badminton, baseball ,and so on which require a great amount of running and concentration helps in keeping a good cardio, perfectly healthy brain, and fitness. It also help people to gain good qualities like leadership, decision making and so on.
Another pivotal argument of my argument is that, antisocial behavior and violence are only few bad background of sports among many goods. Competitive persons tend to overly exaggerate and take up violence in loosing situation. Proper punishments and fine can help in keeping these kind of behavior out of the court. Sports are necessary for every humans of any age. It also has a huge entertainment value which brings together families.
In view of the arguments mentioned above, one can conclude that the goods of sports out way the bad things. In my opinion, people should focus more helping others to restrict and keep there anger in fields.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'team'
Suggestion: team
...ehavior, are raising questions like can teams sports be good for us if they are causi...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...e goods out way the bad. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s cricket, football, badminton, baseball ,and so on which require a great amount o...
^^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...tly healthy brain, and fitness. It also help people to gain good qualities like lead...
^^^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...unishments and fine can help in keeping these kind of behavior out of the court. Sports ar...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8007518797 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62944327947 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.508996277 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2142857143 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35609073445 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105900344932 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113128363839 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211568729021 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142879215875 0.0609392437508 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'team'
Suggestion: team
...ehavior, are raising questions like can teams sports be good for us if they are causi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...e goods out way the bad. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s cricket, football, badminton, baseball ,and so on which require a great amount o...
^^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...tly healthy brain, and fitness. It also help people to gain good qualities like lead...
^^^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...unishments and fine can help in keeping these kind of behavior out of the court. Sports ar...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8007518797 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62944327947 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.508996277 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2142857143 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35609073445 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105900344932 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113128363839 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211568729021 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142879215875 0.0609392437508 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.