Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University students should be required to attend classes
It has been long discussed whether or not the students should be required to attend classes. Some people may disagree with this view; however, in my opinion, it is crucially important for school to ask students to go to classes. The following are the reasons for my stance on this subject.
First and foremost, attending classes can help students expand their social circle. Students can discuss and exchange ideas together during class. Therefore, it is a beneficial way for students to develop their friendships. For instance, by attending the class, students can foster their friendships through cooperation and discussion with their classmates. On the contrary, since it is a good chance for students to meet new friends in classes which consist of lots of students. If students did not go to the class in person, they would have less chance to meet new friends. As a result, students can make friends easily by attending classes.
In addition, attending classes can help students study effortlessly. According to the latest survey conducted by the Ministry of Education, 97 percent of students think that going to class can help them study more effectively. Take my personal experience for example, as a college student, because of the covid-19, schools use online resources to teach instead of going to classes (in-person lectures). However, there are a great number amount of disadvantages for students not attending the class in person, including a lack of interaction in class, which makes it is difficult for teachers to check all students whether they are following. Another disadvantage is that it is harder for students to discuss with a group.
To sum up, judging from the points elaborated in the previous paragraphs, because attending classes can not only help students not only expand their social circle but also learn more effectively, I think that Universities should require students to attend classes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
It has been long discussed whether or not the students should be required to atte...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ures. However, there are a great number amount of disadvantages for students not atten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1961414791 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79984372879 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2530795375 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306129731047 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118847355202 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059326776347 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205799808801 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187691488772 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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