You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realize you had left your wallet there.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• thank you friend for the holiday
• explain that you left your wallet in their house
• give them instructions on how to send it back to you
Dear Caleb,
Hope you doing well. After such a long journey, I just arrived back home. I am really thankful to you for arranging this trip for me. I have really enjoyed the your hospitality. You and your family were so kind. I am really happy that I got this chance to meet all of them.
Another reason behind writing this letter is that accidently I forgot my wallet at your home. When I reached home, I ordered some food from outside at time of delivery I just realized I don’t have my wallet. At first, I thought I lost it somewhere during the journey but then just recalled that I left it in your room while changing my clothes.
As my ID card and driving license is there in the wallet so I can’t even go out and drive. So I would really appreciate if you can send it to me on my home address you have. You can go to any nearest DHL service center and courier it to me, they have overnight delivery option as well. You can also select the payment option as payment on arrival.
With regards
Asad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...this trip for me. I have really enjoyed the your hospitality. You and your family were s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29015544041 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2247838273 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6413405785 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1428571429 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362730124574 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119656402149 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717564202972 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223140478855 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515009718302 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.