Criminal activity have taken a troll in last few years. In today's world a lot of kids and young children are turning towards criminal activity in different parts of nation. A possible reason of getting into such act is illiteracy. Such juveniles, if not punished will continue to harm the society, so rather they shall be punished by sending them to rehab jails.
Young people can be influenced easily for good or bad by the people, as they do not have the correct understanding of what is right and what is wrong. Many professional criminals target these young minds and use them to accomplish their ill will. This is because, most of the activist considers child as an easy target and its difficult for the law to find small children guilty. Apart from this, young adults are falling prey to crime is because of the lack of education. A research conducted by Economy Today, concluded that majority of children who turns to criminal activities are usually the school dropouts or those who do not have the privilege of getting an education.
When a crime is committed, regardless of the age, it should be punished. Even if its a small crime, young people shall not be left unpunished. However, the punishment shall not be severe, but if they are not punished, then they will be encouraged in continuing these illegal activities. So, a good way to punish these juveniles is by sending them to Juvie jails, where they are kept with other criminals of their age. Also, there they can be imparted with knowledge and other activity that can help them to grow into a better person.
In conclusion, a crime is a crime, whether committed by an adult or a young child, they have to be punished by the law. Most of these young people walk on such path because they are not educated enough to understand the right and wrong. So, to punish them juvenile jail can act as a rehab center where they can be molded into better individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66568914956 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5257865505 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513196480938 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2093107757 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5882352941 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163524395873 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577363085922 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484460530767 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107179846092 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152426361002 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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