The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011
The line chart illustrates how many requiries received by the tourist information office in a city by letter or email, by telephone and in person from January to June in 2011
Overall, while the number of enquiries received in person and telephone showed an upward trend, enquiries collected by letter or email saw a moderate decrease over the period
In January 2011, enquiries by telephone were the highest manner with 900. The figure for enquiries received by letter or email start at over 700 requests. There was not many tourists chose to ask in person, with just over 400 enquiries. During the next two months, between February and March, telephone still remained the most common manner with 1000 enquiries. Meanwhile, the number of enquiries in person grew considerably to 800, higher than the figure for email or letter about 100 enquiries in march. From March to June in 2011, there was a significant decrease of 350 in the amount of enquiries by letter or email. The figure for enquiries by telephone remained stable at 1000 from march to april, then it increased dramatically to 1400 in June. Finally, tourists chose requiries in person experienced a fast climbing up by 1100 then it reached a peak at 1900 in June
- Topic 5 Governments around the world are investing heavily in space exploration Some people say this money should be spent on helping people living in poverty or with significant health problems To what extend do you agree 84
- in many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent 61
- The bar graph shows the global sales in billions of dollars of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006
- Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and the environment Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Topic in some countries many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past Do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87559808612 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60262453099 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511961722488 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.182876458 44.8134815571 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.375 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231036575284 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943300602202 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876143336798 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194212095859 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407192993909 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.