Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to your request to share my opinion regarding the short culinary course which you had conducted in your school on this Sunday for home-cooks.
I was absolutely delighted to be a part of it and I appreciate the arrangements that the cooking school had made for a simple course like baking. There were a wide range of items including top-notch cutleries, baking molds of various shapes, specialized equipments and all groceries needed for baking, which were worth the fee we paid to enroll into the course. Apart from this, I was mesmerized by the teaching skill of the chief chef whose dedication helped us to be an expert cook in a short span of time.
I have been practicing regularly all the tips and recipes which the chef had taught us during the class. I feel I have become prowess in cooking, not only because I am using my newly learnt culinary skill efficiently, but also because I have started experimenting with various recipes of cake and croissants baking.
Furthermore, If you are planning for any new courses related to healthy diet preparation, then I would like to take part in it. If possible, kindly arrange a course on vegan diet, not only because it's popularity is increasing, but also because the recipes are challenging for home-cooks like me.
Kindly consider my request and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ms Sruthy Varghese
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...specialized equipments and all groceries needed for baking, which were worth the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, then, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83050847458 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67089013671 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.727376521 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229901626384 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832940291128 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791841807348 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125915091292 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990197720951 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...specialized equipments and all groceries needed for baking, which were worth the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, then, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83050847458 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67089013671 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.727376521 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229901626384 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832940291128 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791841807348 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125915091292 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990197720951 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.