Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that migration from one country to another is getting higher rather than early times. To familiarize the government of the location in which they settled, occupants are inquired to modify their previous lifestyle and attitude towards current one. I completely disagree with that statement because individuals should not live having a sense of obedience.
Firstly, people who are moving to foreign countries are the main source which causes them to be multinational places. Namely, we can find a variety of multicultural members belong to any parts of the Earth. For instance, one of the most metropolitan country, USA, has been taking the worldwide point from past times. However, making a selective community integrated may affect its local language and customs.
Secondly, involving characters to abandon their priorities and then pursuing them to adjustment is underestimation. It means that it is not the same era which had its slaves with dependent attitude as before. For example, my country, Uzbekistan, is also commonwealth place and we have a law like everyone has their own right and freedom rather than restrictions and barriers for foreigners. But giving progressive flexibility to strangers may lead to spreading dissimilar beliefs and perspectives consequently it will be patterns for disappearance of exact location.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirmed my position that rights and privilege is crucially needed to breath what ever happens. In future it would be better way for migrants if an alternative programme will be created to scale down the limitation in immigrants' life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be multinational places. Namely, we can find a variety of multicultural members ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38039215686 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04776785351 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690196078431 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4139099288 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134029467967 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405433400755 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335533182789 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726064273843 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178112216473 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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