Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres, while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each?
The dynamics of shopping have changed rampantly over the years. Some people prefer shopping from magnificent shopping centres while some assert that local market are better. Both the aspects have there own importance and discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, from the recent past, the general trend of shopping has been changed dramatically. Nowadays, people prefer shopping malls and shun the local market because of numerous reasons. Firstly, easy availability , in the magnificent shopping malls consist all genres. Easy availability of all the stuff related to households or clothing are available at one place.For an illustration, various international and national brands are available at one place and thus one can replete his/her hunger of shopping. Secondly, the ambience and environment , the shopping malls are fully air conditioned with soothing music makes the environment cool and friendly. Furthermore, the quality and quantity, the immense shops at shopping malls offer the best quality,deals and choices which proportionally becomes the first choice of customers.
Moving further,the local markets have there own sheen .The local markets provides the cheapest rate with great variety. There is no denying the fact that the ultimate bargaining could be done in large number. Additionally, availability of the cheap and best material makes the local markets still in hot trends. The local markets also offer the local cuisine at the road sides which gives the local markets a distinct charm and consequently, provides an environment of rejuvenation.
To recapitulate, I will emphasize that shopping malls and the local markets have there own importance. Its the individual choice what he/she choose at the particular time
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in the magnificent shopping malls consist all genres.
in the magnificent shopping malls, they consist all genres.
the magnificent shopping malls consist all genres.
the shopping malls are fully air conditioned with soothing music makes the environment cool and friendly.
the shopping malls are fully air conditioned with soothing music which makes the environment cool and friendly.
the shopping malls are fully air conditioned with soothing music making the environment cool and friendly.
and choices which proportionally becomes the first choice of customers.
and choices which proportionally become the first choice of customers.
The local markets provides the cheapest rate
The local markets provide the cheapest rate
Sentence: Secondly, the ambience and environment , the shopping malls are fully air conditioned with soothing music makes the environment cool and friendly.
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