People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
It is believed that people are afraid of making changes in life by nature. It could lead to a wide range of problems but they could be classified into two primary ones. Firstly, there is a risk of losing all that has been acquired throughout life, secondly, starting from scratch could breed depression and deep stress. Solutions for preventing these problems are planning in advance steps as much as setting money aside, and moral preparation for changes and asking help.
Making changes in life is accompanied with the possibility of losing everything. By this I mean that restarting any aspect of life means that person needs some time to find their feet again, in this period a person has to live with a lower salary or without it at all. For example, leaving motherland, refugees and migrants need to adaptate to new rules and demands required in the new country, as much as to find a way to earn livelihood. Solutions for preventing loss are planning all actions carefully and getting information and saving money in order to be prepared for the unemployment period. To illustrate, famous sound producer Nina Kravitz before leaving her dentist career and moving from Russia to Germany had improved her musical skills that enabled her to start a career in a foreign country fast.
Furthermore, making changes in life often lead to depression and anxiety. In other words, feeling that you have to figure out how to live another life that you were used to is linked with fear of failure and loneliness and a sense of discomfort. To illustrate, some researchers say in a Washington Post article that a high percentage of divorced people fight with depression for up to two years. This problem could be solved by psychology practices either with medical specialists or with self-preparation. For example, a lot of caring centres operate in each country and medical personnel could provide any help which is needed.
To conclude, people resist making changes even if it vitaly needed because of possible problems linked with loose of things that made them confident and mental issues. These problems could be combat by making savings beforehand and psychological training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i mean, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01101928375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70588771961 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3628301108 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155239416241 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557398538313 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451420610602 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104544727097 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284638639617 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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