In modern times, people are more under stress more than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being. State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions
It is widely argued that many people nowadays find their lives more stressful than they used to, and thus resulting in a general deterioration in people’s overall health, while it is a serious issue, it can be tackled by seeking a particular hobby to live with.
To begin with, the main cause of stress is that society is becoming highly competitive and people are now under intense pressure to succeed. Firstly, the insecure job market has contributed to making people think that they will lose their jobs if they are unable to compete. Furthermore, society demands constant self-development to sustain the success. As a result, people undergo a high degree of tension and pressure at work, which as an extremely negative effect on their mental and physical health. As a matter of fact, in the recent survey conducted on working labours in VietNam, over 80 per cent of those questioned claimed that they are under intense emotional strain, because of social pressure to maintain competitive.
Nonetheless, there are solutions to solve this chronic issue. One of the ways to deal with depression is to find a hobby that allow one to forget the pressure one faces in professional life. Recreational activity can help people stop thinking about their worries and concerns temporarily or perhaps permanently. Besides, taking part in activities with friends can be a particularly effective means of alleviating work-related stress. For instance, hiking clubs have recently become widely popular in the south of Viet Nam. People who join such activity claimed that hiking with a group of like-minded people help to revitalize and strengthen them both physically and mentally. Therefore, the positive energy they generate from this pastime help them cope with work-related anxiety.
In conclusion, it is clear that intense pressure to succeed that creating a great deal of stress, which is detrimental to people’s health. Nevertheless, this issue can be resolved by finding a hobby which individuals can delight in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22530864198 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87128453517 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0757172137 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181472455345 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568038420851 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451368996922 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112255795438 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334958917493 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.