When People move to another country some of them decide to follow the custom of the new country others prefer to keep own customs. Compare these choices and support your opinion
With the adequate implementation of globalisation policies many countries have come up with liberal policies for individuals to migrate to a new country for work or education. After settling up in a new country some individuals would like to adopt to the traditions of the new place however there is an another group who wants to stick to their own conventional practises. This essay will discuss both the views and outline its opinion.
With the adverse of internet one can easily learn the rituals of any nation. Adopting to the procedures and practise of the migrant country will open the doors for making new friend in the neighbourhood and socialize in the local community. Many settlers find it as fun to follow the advent occasion, one shining example could be we would have seen the pictures of our friends from west attending halloween parties and thanks giving days which they would have never celebrated in their hometown. They find it grateful and feel the social acceptance by participating in such ceremonies.
Every individual is unique and their upbringing plays an important role accepting new traditions. No matter what, some ethnic groups has strict protocols to stay only with their deep-rooted tradition because they find it has a pride to hold on to their ancestors advice. To illustrate, people from punjab will never compromise to wearing their turban. Many countries have updated their security policies and permitts people to wear turban any were in their nation.
To conclude, picking the path of acceptance is one’s individual decision, however in my opinion I feel sticking to our own roots and following the procedures in an abroad country will spread our diversified culture among the native citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... country some individuals would like to adopt to the traditions of the new place however...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a group' or 'another group'.
Suggestion: a group; another group
...tions of the new place however there is an another group who wants to stick to their own convent...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'funs'?
Suggestion: funs
...cal community. Many settlers find it as fun to follow the advent occasion, one shin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14788732394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76627032977 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4065366416 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147271401693 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053418344823 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463638896927 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951939737203 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480715211926 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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