It is true that tourism is connected to economic prosperity of a country and it may cause some harm however, in my opinion, it can be averted. As far as I am aware, all governments in the world have a Tourism and development authority or a dedicated ministry department to plan, develop necessary infrastructures and promote the tourism. Why because tourism promising lot to the economy and strengthen its economic performance by means spending by the foreigners on its soil.
In my opinion spending by foreign tourist will boost economic performance of a country because there is revenue to the country in several aspects. For example, a flight career landed in a country airport pay taxes and landing fees. The visitors stays in hotel, use taxis and public transport, go to restaurants, pay for entrance tickets and such every spending helping the local business success and so jobs stable. That means more tourism more business, more jobs and more revenue to the government. It is a cycle in which the money rotates with the consumptions by consumers. A country's natural resources can deplete or the selling price in the market can fall any time due to a reason not in control of anyone like Covid-19 situation. For this reason, every country as alternate sources to thrive on economy, should plan and develop necessary infrastructures to attract tourist.
A great example to how can a county to ensure this is that, Qatar is a rich country in the world, thanks to its huge reserve of natural gas; but it is also well noted that the country official is continuously planning, developing and building infrastructure to boost tourism and foreign visitors in the long run. Qatar is the host country for coming FIFA World Cub 2022 and recently Qatar was also won the bid to host Asian Games 2030. Alongside the development of public parks, shopping malls, hotels, other infrastructures and facilities that create new business like international restaurants.
In conclusion, a country should ensure by supporting tourism and tourists by planning, developing and facilitating all visitors and residents with proper infrastructures, in which its economic prosperity continues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'stay'.
Suggestion: stay
...ay taxes and landing fees. The visitors stays in hotel, use taxis and public transpor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12921348315 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98439424574 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542134831461 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9139808777 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374259872839 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114275311237 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898466229089 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23317113996 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494876901621 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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