Essay topics:
The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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Essays by user Taiwo A. Adebiyi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consideration'?
Suggestion: consideration
...lligence in this case refers to a great considerations of the effects of every decision taken ...
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Line 3, column 1474, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
...oreign origins. The above illustrations shows that the success of a leader is conting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3665.0 2235.4752809 164% => OK
No of words: 683.0 442.535393258 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36603221083 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11216868763 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1605302574 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 333.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487554904832 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1162.8 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.340764984 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.708333333 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4583333333 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130005980193 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037351207861 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421255500164 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979071997098 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483865794023 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 199.0 100.480337079 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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