Some people believe that the earth is being damaged by human activity. Others feel the activity makes the earth a better place to live in, Discuss both the views and state your view
In this expanding galaxy, Mother Earth is the only place where life is possible. It is believed by some, Humans harm the Earth in the name of development while others feel the globe is getting a finer place to live. This ensuing paragraph of this essay will discuss both the views objectively, before arriving at a conclusion.
On one hand, some consider the globe is being vandalized by humans. The main reasons are motor vehicles and rapid industrialization which is happening across the world. Although both the things are inevitable to modern society, It is a menace to mankind as well as to the globe. To cite a shinning example, The emission of greenhouse gases from automobiles leads to global warming which eventually ends up with the melting of the icebergs in the poles. If this prevails, it will bring a lot of destruction to Mother Earth.
On the other hand, Though the Earth provides basics stuff to mankind, some do believe that the engineering works of humans, making the world incredibly sophisticated to live. It is a commonly agreed fact that the rapid growth of technologies has made the lifestyle of people one step ahead of the previous time. For an instance, light is a marvelous discovery that has made human's night into day.
In conclusion, this essay has aptly emphasized that human activities have made the world more comfortable to live however it is quite hard to deny the reality that the earth is being damaged by people but it can be rectified through various precautious measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73015839311 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9966562751 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333105881975 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936652188033 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087220827032 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179021967096 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08097926467 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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