Some people consider thinking about and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue that people should simply live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree? Use at least one personal example in your response
Making future plans is an inevitable and subconsciously practiced act. It argued that this practice is a total waste of time and that people should simply live in the moment rather than thinking and making plans for the future. I agree that making plans for the future is one of the major determinants of life’s success. This will be shown by analyzing the avoidance in the wastage of resources and meeting opportunities with preparedness.
Firstly, building future plans helps one avoid wasting resources and to live within their means. For instance, I remember a time I planned my feeding and transportation budget for three consecutive months, spending irrationally on frivolities was totally ruled out. This improved my quality of life because I was comfortable all through the months. Thus, this proves the positives of thinking and planning ahead.
More also, being prepared and ready to take on opportunities is an outcome of making future plans. An example will be shown in the life of my cousin who has always wanted to be a journalist. He always made plans ahead, did private and public interview rehearsals, listens to news podcasts and tries to make a report. There was an opening in a highly reputable news reporting firm several months later, and he was selected because of the incredible scores recorded from his interview. Hence, it is without doubt that planning for the future is a stepping stone to living a successful life.
As clearly illustrated above, rather than enjoying and living life as it comes, It is better to engage in making future plans. A fulfilling and successful life is guaranteed. I recommend that the argument be debunked, and young people should be encouraged and educated on the benefits of living a well planned life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...time and that people should simply live in the moment rather than thinking and making plans f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02721088435 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80666455287 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256528733474 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888839258834 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864079337397 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166208234856 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723001238189 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.