Commiting crime often is a new normal to prisoners nowadays. Ex-convicts are repeating crimes when they release from jail. In my opinion, there are myriad causes for this problem in my view and this essay will discuss both causes and soultions for the same.
Families of the prisoner is one of the reason for this issue, generally his family won’t accept and don’t provide money to stand on their own to who is sentenced to jail, one will go into isolation and look for an easy money as he need for living. In addition to this, drugs play major role. It is not easy to get out of narcotic habituation, after releasing they look for drug peddler and get what they need. The recent survey published by McnSky stated that, nearly 86% criminals committing crimes after using drugs, in that 72% are who just got freedom from conviction.
The possible solutions to above problems are, government should arrange a session with family and crime doer to accept him, they should also coach him in any interested field other than crime, this will provide bread and butter to him once he is out and he need not to depend on others or commit new unlawful activities. Furthermore, prison officials should test the samples and understand the narcotic habits while convicted entering into jail, further, they should send them to re-habitation center’s and treat them. this way at least he will releaved from major addiction and live normally. To illustrate, Turkey jails are tracking drug addict movements in jail by taking blood samples early and sending to doctors for cure, this approach resulted in 10% decrease in recommiting crime rate.
To recapitulate, families and drugs plays vital role in re-commiting crimes which can be reduced by above stated solutions like adding government programmes for family re-union and moving them away from norcotic activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is often
Commiting crime often is a new normal to prisoners nowadays. Ex-...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy money'.
Suggestion: easy money
...one will go into isolation and look for an easy money as he need for living. In addition to t...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depend'?
Suggestion: depend
...r to him once he is out and he need not to depend on others or commit new unlawful activi...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... re-habitation center’s and treat them. this way at least he will releaved from majo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, while, at least, in addition, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99035369775 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52231897873 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5727809889 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269227123449 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09741470975 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372766729345 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165839720452 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489104405974 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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