There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development
We are observing significant growth in using computers for work and studies. it's changed humans working culture and learning style as it's easily accessible and low cost. As coin has both sides, Using computer technology also has both advantages and disadvantages as outlined below.
Computers made life easy as we can work from anywhere, mothers who take care of their infants mostly benefited from work from home, In addition to this, employers motivating their employees to work from home as they can reduce maintenance cost. employees also can save energy, time and money without travelling to office. In contrast to this employees also involving in few cyber threats as they lack of knowledge in security features or might they are leaking confidential information intentionally. For example, due to some issues or unhappy with organisation, employees exposing critical and confidential information to rest of the world through internet. this is a serious issue and we don't have lot of remedy's to stop this unfortunately. Further more, People started implementing artificial intelligent to automate everything which humans do in daily life, some extent this is acceptable and showing good results but the consequences of this will have to pay more in future if its exceeds like unemployment.
Students who can't afford regular university degrees are opting for vocational courses and accessing study materials on internet, This is a good sign as they can have plethora of books to explore and accentuate they're knowledge. Though, Some students getting confusion to choose from variety of sources. In addition to this, University's offering more diploma kind of courses in online by providing online materials, In fact this became a trend now. while reading online books and materials, there is a chance of deviating from course because of online ads and lack of mind stability. even if we control more, there is a chance of going into other situations.
In conclusion, Humans are most benefited by using computer technology in good way, by taking few precautions or following best practises and limit usage, we can overcome the problems or disadvantages from the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, kind of, of course, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28242074928 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89423847772 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0291518111 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287635591069 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769155010908 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588676255652 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142783986999 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06351166672 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.