You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Nathan,
This letter regards some facts about the deteriorating condition of the furniture in one of your units where we live as tenants.
Let me begin by introducing myself to you. I am Jack Nicolson, living at one of your southern units on Peddar Road. Though we really like the accommodation due to the nice locality and big lawns, still there is one alarming area I would want to notify you with. Here, most of the furniture is ancient and is in a bad state making it extremely dangerous for us especially for my two young kids who are very young and can get easily hurt. Also, due to the above they can be not be used, which has caused us a lot of discomforts as we can have to manage the household without much furniture.
I would really appreciate it if you start looking into the matter by providing us some new basic furniture specially Beds, Closets for 2 rooms and a dining table for the Dining room. Even If they are second hand but in good condition then also we are fine with them.
As we are struggling with the above especially with a big family with children, Any sooner intervention would bring us big relief and joy,
Thanks,
Jack Nicolson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52093023256 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46461600891 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2511022799 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209201280844 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863823516879 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685533454537 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136977655678 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788692230522 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.