There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit You have complained several times but with no success Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre In your letter Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is Say

Essay topics:

There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:

• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• Say what happened the last times you complained
• Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir,

I am a regular visitor of " Rio sports club". I am writing this letter to complain about the changing rooms facility in the center. I have objected the issue several times before, unfortunatily no action yet taken place. This is the 3rd time when I am complaing. People face hard time to access these room,which gets stucked and diffecult to open , because the door locks of these rooms are way outdated .

As, I mentiod before, I already complaint the coach about this issue, However, he ignored it as nobody riase the voice except me.

Therefore,installation of new locks will help a lot to use the rooms more oftenly,which is a huge problem and need to be solved promptly, because people like me have to wait for long time to get in to the room when door gets stucked .

Thanks for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
John Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am a regular visitor of ' Rio spo...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... changing rooms facility in the center. I have objected the issue several times b...
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...which gets stucked and diffecult to open , because the door locks of these rooms a...
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...or locks of these rooms are way outdated . As, I mentiod before, I already comp...
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...et in to the room when door gets stucked . Thanks for your consideration. I loo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89954159855 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698717948718 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7621243158 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210100912077 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721715842511 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590568082304 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952405235892 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710875157615 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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