You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
To be a vegetarian or non-vegetarian is a very personal choice for everyone and it could stem from many reasons. Personally, I believe in vegetarianism which means eating only plant-based food. The following essay would highlight some of the favorable points to not eating meat or fish.
To begin with, Religion may play a big role in deciding whether someone can or should eat meat/fish or no. Statistically speaking, Asian countries like in India, many people like Jains would simply not eat any meat products as this is against their religious beliefs. More and more people are also turning away from this simply because its ethically and morally incorrect to kill someone for self-pleasure.
The other point to support is health hazards. Scientifically speaking, every animal when they are killed releases very poisonous hormones which is detrimental to human health when they are consumed. So, eating meat based food over the years can be really deadly. This slowly makes human body full of all these poisonous cells which may result in deadly diseases like high cholesterol, jammed arteries causing heart attacks, cancers and other life-threatening diseases.
But the most staggering impact of eating meat based food is nature imbalance. As humans are using various animals for personal consumption, Its leading to a big nature imbalance where humans may soon overpower the number of animals causing a big environmental hazard causing everyone in this habitat to get impacted severely.
Ironically, many people may argue that humans need a protein rich diet to sustain which can only come from animals, Science has brutally rejected this notion and rather stressed on the great advantages a plant based food can bring to anyones life getting all the right nutrients a human body needs to survive.
Finally to conclude, backed by science and numerous other studies its proven that a well-balanced vegetarian meal can impart us all the varied nutrients a human body requires to flourish. This way we would have a win-win situation where we are not playing with our healths and at the same time our precious mother nature is also saved from any kind of imbalance.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...od. The following essay would highlight some of the favorable points to not eating meat or ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 293, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...ng all the right nutrients a human body needs to survive. Finally to conclude, bac...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ients a human body needs to survive. Finally to conclude, backed by science and nume...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 176, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'flourishing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: flourishing
... varied nutrients a human body requires to flourish. This way we would have a win-win situa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, well, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16384180791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71838317264 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6011016596 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.866666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191521984321 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667652012241 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381673085578 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970645534158 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480929502381 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...od. The following essay would highlight some of the favorable points to not eating meat or ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 293, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...ng all the right nutrients a human body needs to survive. Finally to conclude, bac...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ients a human body needs to survive. Finally to conclude, backed by science and nume...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 176, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'flourishing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: flourishing
... varied nutrients a human body requires to flourish. This way we would have a win-win situa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, well, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16384180791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71838317264 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6011016596 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.866666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191521984321 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667652012241 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381673085578 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970645534158 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480929502381 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.