Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
Some people think that a lot of attention and many efforts has been put into the preservation of birds and dangerous animals. I strongly agree with this notion and my reasons will be further explained.
Firstly, these are wild animals that give little or nothing to the growth of the economy hence, putting too many resources into protecting them should be avoided. For instance, studies show that the Lagos state government allocates about ten million naira annually for feeding these dangerous species at the Ikeja game reserve meanwhile, the revenue generated from visitors at the centre barely amounts to one million naira in a year. since the return is ridiculously low, it shows that too much has been given and less gotten.
Furthermore, the species been kept out of harms way are actually largely harmful to humans and can cause death if they are mistakenly released into the community. Therefore, time and money should not be invested into safeguarding their lives. For example, there was a situation sometime in 1993, where a lion broke out of the Ibadan zoo. The guard could not restrict the lion as soon as it got out and it was quick enough to tear the first person on it its path into shreds. The person died instantly.
In conclusion, the school of thought that says that too much has gone into preserving wild species have the same belief as mine since they cause harm to the society and do not help in increasing the country's finances. The concerned authorities should as a result, set up a committee to check its continuation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...amounts to one million naira in a year. since the return is ridiculously low, it show...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84962406015 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52583463016 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6703177663 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207219575864 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618012015194 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757542792964 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116382744326 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701983923582 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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