It is said that people hold conflicting views about the purpose of education. While some inhabitants believe that education is responsible to prepare useful members of society, some others think that education should help its learners to achieve their personal ambitions. This essay is going to analyze the reasons behind these two views before showing why I favor both of these.
To commence with, the purpose of education to help its learners to achieve their personal ambitions is reasonable in some ways. First, each of us are different to the others because we have our own ambitions, and we always want to achieve them. For instance, at school, there are many activities to find out what students' ambitions are. Hence, teachers can help students with lessons related to their professions. Second, ambitions push everyone out of their limits. To be more specific, in order to make our dreams come true, we can not do any meaningless things, we must make use of every single second to come closer to our dreams with best efforts.
On the other hand, the purpose of education to prepare useful people of society has some advantages as well. In this day and age, due to the rapid development of the human being, we must be useful if we do not want to be left behind. Therefore, schools are considered to be the best sources of necessary knowledge for a global citizens. Moreover, personal ambitions sometimes can be useful for society. For instance, Thomas Edison had an endless passion for Physics, he fulfilled his own ambitions by bringing out such great inventions which changed the face of our society apparently.
All in all, education is responsible help its learners to become useful and to be able to achieve their ambitions. Educators should find the best way to balance these two elements.
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 years and over whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months
- Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks Others think that students of all ages and ability levels should be able to attend universities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life Others say that experiences as a teenager especially at school are more influential Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...gle second to come closer to our dreams with best efforts. On the other hand, the purpos...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...ces of necessary knowledge for a global citizens. Moreover, personal ambitions sometimes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92131147541 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60204785703 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0535373066 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379216281612 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123461699175 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113260112589 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234014156476 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933380974826 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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