In the globalized world, people has a various demand, according to which different industries have produce different goods and service. It is often believe that, people have many choices in different field. This essay will elaborate how i totally believe in this statement.
In the beginning, food is most essential basic need of people. Industrial sector has brought many kind of food either it may be noodles, biscuits or food related to rice product. Also their are many departmental store , supermarkets which sells different kind of goods so that people can easily buy them for daily use. For e.g. Wai Wai noodles is very famous in Nepal but their are other noodles as well so people have choice to choose one. Previously, food which is given to children was prepared at home with the help of ingredients which are available at home but nowadays, in each and every city we can find departmental store full with baby's product .Hence not only food but we have many choice in our basic needs.
Secondly, gold and diamond are the two expensive choices made by the people in different country. On the other hand, internet has taken the market widely all over the world. Not only this, people have many choices reading their travels. For instance, Thailand is best place to travel during holidays but their are other country which has a very beautiful culture, religion , norms due to this people have many places for their vacation. Therefore, it is clear that human being has many choices in their life.
To sum up, human being has many choices regarding their daily uses but people are not satisfied with this in todays world so i am sure that choices will go on increasing in future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his statement. In the beginning, food is most essential basic need of people. ...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...f people. Industrial sector has brought many kind of food either it may be noodles, biscu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...scuits or food related to rice product. Also their are many departmental store , sup...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...s or food related to rice product. Also their are many departmental store , supermark...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Also their are many departmental store , supermarkets which sells different kind...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Wai
...easily buy them for daily use. For e.g. Wai Wai noodles is very famous in Nepal but the...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...Wai noodles is very famous in Nepal but their are other noodles as well so people hav...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...partmental store full with babys product .Hence not only food but we have many cho...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...rtmental store full with babys product .Hence not only food but we have many choice i...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rtmental store full with babys product .Hence not only food but we have many choice i...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choices made by the people in different country. On the other hand, internet has...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...g their travels. For instance, Thailand is best place to travel during holidays but the...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...est place to travel during holidays but their are other country which has a very beau...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h has a very beautiful culture, religion , norms due to this people have many plac...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...utiful culture, religion , norms due to this people have many places for their vacat...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... satisfied with this in todays world so i am sure that choices will go on increas...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sure that choices will go on increasing in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82130584192 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36824165429 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1505335635 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253067125038 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103545673883 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789141371374 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173251608172 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511094148276 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his statement. In the beginning, food is most essential basic need of people. ...
^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...f people. Industrial sector has brought many kind of food either it may be noodles, biscu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...scuits or food related to rice product. Also their are many departmental store , sup...
^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...s or food related to rice product. Also their are many departmental store , supermark...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Also their are many departmental store , supermarkets which sells different kind...
^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Wai
...easily buy them for daily use. For e.g. Wai Wai noodles is very famous in Nepal but the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...Wai noodles is very famous in Nepal but their are other noodles as well so people hav...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...partmental store full with babys product .Hence not only food but we have many cho...
^^
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...rtmental store full with babys product .Hence not only food but we have many choice i...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rtmental store full with babys product .Hence not only food but we have many choice i...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choices made by the people in different country. On the other hand, internet has...
^^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...g their travels. For instance, Thailand is best place to travel during holidays but the...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...est place to travel during holidays but their are other country which has a very beau...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h has a very beautiful culture, religion , norms due to this people have many plac...
^^
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...utiful culture, religion , norms due to this people have many places for their vacat...
^^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... satisfied with this in todays world so i am sure that choices will go on increas...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sure that choices will go on increasing in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82130584192 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36824165429 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1505335635 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253067125038 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103545673883 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789141371374 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173251608172 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511094148276 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.