Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that climate change is the most dangerous problem nowadays and we need to solve it. But there are some others claim we have to find a way to live with it. In my point of view, i partly agree for some reasons dicussed below
One the one hand, the planet that we are living in is destroying everyday both from the outside and inside and global warming is crucial to life. Some people think that humans can not deal with climate change even though governments are trying to reduce it. For example, several scientists suggest that buildings should be built on the sea or event some special devices for people to live with smoke and bad weathers
On the other hand, others claim that people must prevent climate change as much as they can. Firstly, it means that they avoid bad effects from natural such as increase sea level, greenhouse effect, ice cap, forest burning, typhoons and storms are happened everyday. For instance, the air is getting hotter and full of noxious chemicals so it brings serious consequences for our life cycle. Secondly, prevent that problematic makes better life for animals, plant, humans and some projects. In result, they can enjoy fresh air, far from diseases caused by global warming, maintain healthy lifestyle, alter life quality
In conclusion, prevent climate change is the most essential function for people nowadays. Better life will come if people do somethings to avoid that issue instead of suffering consequences from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...net that we are living in is destroying everyday both from the outside and inside and gl...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...much as they can. Firstly, it means that they avoid bad effects from natural such...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rning, typhoons and storms are happened everyday. For instance, the air is getting hotte...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32282930927 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1125198245 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.3 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307138647464 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128678433278 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929757421 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203847083619 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946998068007 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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