People have controversial preferences about living in a house or apartment. I personally believe that there are numerous bright and dark sides to both choices, and one can decide based on their condition.
First of all, there are various positive points that encourage families to choose houses as their home. First and foremost might be the vast area of them which gives the freedom to take advantage of the extra room. However, this might be assumed a negative point for ones who lack the time or money to keep the house clean. Another undoubted pros of the houses is their silence, thanks to independent walls, the level of noises is dramatically lower than that of apartments. While this feature costs the lack of safety provided by apartments, by the presence of reliable neighbors.
Furthermore, the existence of yards and gardens in houses may suit some people, as well as the fascinating scenery that usually surrounds them. Whilst, apartments are mainly located in crowded regions with the view of dark and dull walls. Although apartment residents can make short trips to nearby parks and nature to get rid of the boring atmosphere of their homes, as well as growing plants within their flats. In addition, apartments are mostly located in city centers, which enables the workforce to reach their offices easily, and avoid long commutes, which definitely worth the cost they pay for apartments, whereas purchasing a house at the city center might not be affordable for them.
To sum up, I believe that despite the pros and cons of both residential choices, it totally depends on the situation and lifestyle of the person, when it comes to decision-making.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02877697842 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65787177777 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6347477116 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171313022899 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611340678325 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728976436852 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868415347802 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569426571682 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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