These days people are moving to developed nations. Why it is happening? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Indeed, in modern era, number of individuals are moved to developed countries. There are some reasons behind this phenomenon such as, for getting more facilities and so on. According to me it has more disadvantages rather than advantages, which I will highlight in the further paragraphs.
First and foremost, for getting more facilities people move to developed nations. This means, in wealthy countries education, accommodation, jobs are more likely to available which is beneficial for people's lives. Thus, it is helpful for their families also because if people earn more money then their family live with comfortable, without any burden and tension.
It has more disadvantages. Firstly, with more individuals pollution may be increased because the uses of private vehicles. To explain , people use more vehicles for their own work purposes such as ,going to jobs, at school, to buy somethings, which may damage environment. Moreover, the wealthy nation may become overcrowded because of increased population. If large number of individuals are live there so crowd may also increased. Thus, with moving to other nation the nation become overcrowded,and pollution may also increased.
Despite having more disadvantages, there are one major advantage of this trend, economy boost. This means, with higher number of people the population of country may be boosted such as it become famous and familiar.
To sum up , although there are number of drawbacks namely, pollution, overcrowd , the one major advantage cannot be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50210970464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95503337075 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2227837039 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116585141126 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446928148405 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043552988856 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644419886077 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182313364274 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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