You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the training course you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir
I writing the letter for my manager. The letter is about my job. I will be get course useful for my job. If you let me.
I want to take a course for my. The course is program make financial calculations. The program is very important for my work. It is program new program at the world. II want to learn the program. As a financial worker I can take the course. When I take the course, it is very useful and I teach other financial workers. We are using now old fiancial program. If you let me I can change the program. The program is calculation easy, very useful and making any financial colcukations for example: any selaries, payments, expenses, gains. All proses making just one program, because the program is very important for my job.
If you let me I can start the course next week. Believe me I can do that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir I writing the letter for...
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Dear Sir I writing the letter for my manager. ...
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Dear Sir I writing the letter for my manager. The ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I will be get course useful for my job. If you let me. I want to take ...
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...e useful for my job. If you let me. I want to take a course for my. The cou...
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... for my job. If you let me. I want to take a course for my. The course...
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...he world. II want to learn the program. As a financial worker I can take the cour...
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...nt to learn the program. As a financial worker I can take the course. When I tak...
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... I teach other financial workers. We are using now old fiancial program. If you l...
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...We are using now old fiancial program. If you let me I can change the program. T...
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...ow old fiancial program. If you let me I can change the program. The program is ...
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... can change the program. The program is calculation easy, very useful and making...
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...sy, very useful and making any financial colcukations for example: any selaries, ...
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...ents, expenses, gains. All proses making just one program, because the program is...
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...ogram is very important for my job. If you let me I can start the course nex...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ogram is very important for my job. If you let me I can start the course next ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 26.3917525773 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37820512821 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48071953836 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2404407074 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 40.1764705882 76.5299724578 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.17647058824 16.8248392259 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211885709676 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880329275679 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695927011977 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178208695344 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873835306048 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 8.37731958763 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 70.7449484536 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.35 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 8.62886597938 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.