Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Topic is believed to be one of the most common issue in today's contemporary life. This is a widely-held claim that there are various considerations from people who have sundry estimations from each other to improve road safety and foreclose road accidents. My opinion is that although, both comments might be sundry, however, both of them are benefical to road safety and to foreclose traffic accidents.
Unquestionably, the mass of people suffer from traffic accidents every year. To preclude that governments decided to make severe punishments for driving mistakes. Absolutely, these kind of means are for people's health and the key to preclude road accidents. Strict penalties may help to scare dangerous drivers, in other words, drivers will avoid from severe punishments. In my opinion, governments should make once more severe penalties for drivers, because humans' health are more important than punishments. Moreover, it would be the key to reducing road accidents and help in improving road safety, if people spend their one day without driving car in each week. Furthermore, it would be good for environment.
On the other hand, the vast majority of people regard that governments should not make strict penalties to improve traffic safety or foreclose road accidents and should deduct some of severe punishments. Instead of them, governments should make a law which about if people make a offence with driving, that person should work free for governments or make a charity. It is throughout better idea for both drivers and governments. In addition, strict punishments may entail to dilemma for foreign viators.
Taking all the above into account it may be concluded that despite the fact that penalties might be strict or other measures might be difficult to do, in my opinion, both of means are benefical for people's life, improve road safety and preclude traffic accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26072607261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78976489687 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491749174917 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7701960838 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388587264562 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127846051424 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626567196017 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240291104565 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404182700045 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.