Some people think that it is more important to build new houses than to plant trees. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A topical issue in modern society is the choice between the development of residential area and protecting the environment. It is argued that new houses are more vital than to plant trees. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this view for several reasons that will be discussed below.
There are two main reasons why I strongly disagree with establishing new houses is immensely crucial, rather than saving the environment. Firstly, building projects have negative impacts on the natural. To elaborate, people need to cut down trees in order to have land to build new houses, and the primitive trees in forests can be chopped down for households. Secondly, people spend a large deal of money to purchase a new house. Therefore, people will choose various places where they not only live but also save money as an apartment.
A further reason why I would argue that the more new houses have been built, the more environmental problems have happened. This is because the number of houses are higher the number of trees. In fact, trees play an important role because they absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen into the air. Therefore, if there is a significant decrease in the figure of trees, the planet will pose a threat.
In conclusion, building new houses and planting are topics which are very relevant in modern society. I am of the opinion that establishing houses is increasing more and more, meanwhile forests have been damaged and they cannot restore like before. If people want to have a better life, they will have to think twice before doing any tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95505617978 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58015196022 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6506932241 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293179904473 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912977126244 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719021527717 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169913509876 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342798591889 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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