In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In any nation there are people of multifarious financial statuses, some believe that folks with surging salaries are a bane to the country and the rest think that the government should restrict the income of the public which already is immensly financially free. Here i will account my prescriptive for both the views.
To embark on, countries with high economy have a considerable amount of elite population,this has many advantages in rudimentary aspects. So it is a sign of the country's wealth when most of the citizens belong to upper middleclass. futhurmore, when people have more salary without the government restricting it then the government can expect a decent and punctual generation of the tax revenue from the multitude. when the citizenry have no cap for their salary hike it is a good advantage for the government as they can spend good leading to the increase in the economy of the nation.
On the other hand, there are a part of people from every level of financial hierarchy of the nation who believe that consistent hike in the salaries of people is precarious for the economy of the country, moreover after a certain point the services of the high paid employe becomes unaffordable. To exemplify, few european countries have fairly well paid doctors and once they gain experiance they have an exponential hike in their salaries which hence made the quality medical services unaffordable for the middle and poor class. when there are no restrictions on the income of citizens it is difficult to maintain equality among the people of the nation .
To conclude, folks are deserved to be rewarded with high salaries for their hardwork and talent, And also should be encouraged with incentives to work harder, But I opine the government should cap the salaries of the lavishly paid people and maintain a homogenous distribution of wealth amongst its folks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01282051282 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81979607156 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3474031546 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.4 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326247145538 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120249562778 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578233503835 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198464682216 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265230670051 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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