Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Recently, using alternative forms of medicine become popular among people. Although some people claim that these methods are useless and dangerous, I believe they could be beneficial to health.
There are several reasons why the conventional medical community is often dismissive of alternatives. Firstly, there has been little scientific research into alternative medicine. This lack of information frightens people. Secondly, people who use this type of therapies often try it because of a friend's or family member's recommendation. Hearing positive stories about alternative medicine, people start their therapies with a good mindset, so this might be the cause of their cure. Moreover, these therapies usually only useful for long-term, chronic conditions. Acute medical problems such as injuries from accidents require more conventional methods.
One the other hand, strong arguments in favour of alternatives remain. Despite the lack of scientific proof, there are lots of anecdotal evidence to suggest that therapies work. In addition, these methods are far from being dangerous, they often have no side effects. So the worst outcome could be no change. The strongest arguments for the effectiveness of alternative medicine is that it has been available for ages. If these were completely ineffective, people would not continue using such medicine. For instance, drinking herbal teas to cure some conditions have been a popular method for centuries.
In conclusion, I strongly believe alternative and conventional methods can and should coexist. They are both useful to cure particular medical problems. The best situation would be to support conventional medicine with alternatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71825396825 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95835662112 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1972825339 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8421052632 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211376577456 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635291538864 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435490204362 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145746085429 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331551401969 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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