Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A topical issue in modern society is passing punishments for criminals. it is often said that each type of crime should have certain punishments; however, others say that it depends on several factors. This essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Firstly, people worry that offenders will repeat cruel activities. For example, murders must receive the death sentence because they made a big mistake to victims’ families. Secondly, it is a good method to raise people’s awareness. To elaborate, people educate their children avoid breaking the laws.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why others claim that it finds careful to decide on the punishment. First of all, the court must have important evidences to give a suitable sentence for criminals. To be specific, detective polices find out the reasons why people become offenders. Furthermore, criminals also need an opportunity to remake their lives. For instance, if murders have to die when they are still young, they will not have any chances to become a good citizen and their family will tremendously depressed.
In conclusion, deciding on the punishment for offenders is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I am of the opinion that the government should care more to citizens’ lives in their own country by raising funds for education systems and encouraging people follow the laws. if there is a significant decrease in the development of crime, the society will become better and people will live in the safety environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69072910275 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9694062718 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303722958812 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921161140521 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979865079516 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189407852393 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543872885951 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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