When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to planning a construction, there has been a controversial argument regarding whether to prioritise its practical values or its aesthetic ones. Personally, I believe that this matter should depend on certain kind of constructions.
On the one hand, a building’s exterior design can be beneficial in some cases as it helps attract people’s attention. These days, people tend to travel to places with appealing decorations that could satisfy their eyes and take photos to show their friends via media apps. For example, a café with attracting backgrounds would possibly draw many more customers, especially the teenagers, than a café with basic ones. Rather than coming to truly enjoy a cup of coffee, they come for a photo shoot with the café’s decorations.
On the other hand, many civil buildings that provide service for residents should focus on the purposes they serves rather than their exterior appearance. With regard to service constructions, people would surely give priority to the quality of the facilities they provide which assure themselves of receiving the best assistance. For example, people, especially the adults, would have a tendency to go to a hospital with well-qualified amenities rather than the one with appealing appearance but negatively commented regarding service.
To conclude, I can say in affirmative that the intended use and exterior designs are equally important when constructing a building. However, people should carefully consider the building’s purpose in order to make a proper decision on whether to put their emphasis on the former or the latter one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'serve'
Suggestion: serve
...dents should focus on the purposes they serves rather than their exterior appearance. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, kind of, in some cases, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42125984252 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98747307101 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2322676963 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.181818182 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158508935424 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606096097203 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052452813193 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976467469795 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371260783307 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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