Schools should encourage children to eat healthy food while others say that parents should teach them about having a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the explosion of modernization, fast food and other foods which are injurious to health is available in our surrounding. Teaching children to grab healthy food is a controversial topic so far, some opine that parents should responsible for encouraging children’s awareness about eating diet food whereas others claim that a school is the favorable place to learn this. From my perspective, I believe that both parents and teachers should share a hand on this joint task.
Without any no doubt, school time have many opportunities to educate children about healthy lifestyle. Children spend more time on school and learn many things from it. It is necessary that apart from academic knowledge, health education should be an integral subject in curriculum at all ages, especially for kids to develop their healthy eating habits easily. Moreover, teachers are the one who interact directly with students so they can do this by numerous ways because students respect and tend to absorb what they have learned from their tutors carefully. Some actions would be established in school to help children understanding the importance of healthy diet such as extracurricular activities about gardening or workshops of balanced diet affection.
On the other hand, it is easy to see why a set of thinkers supposed that parents have a great responsibility on their children’s diet and health. According to many findings of the U.S researchers, children imitate their parents almost immediately or they reflect most of parents’ gestures and habits in other words. So, as role models, parents need to make sure they are demonstrating a healthy attitude toward food in order to their children can gain a good awareness since beginning. To exemplify, if parents involved in a negative eating strategy which contains a deficiency in one of a group of nutrients or overconsumption of greasy dishes, their children would be misunderstood about a healthy lifestyle. As a result, these kids also tended to have a higher prevalence of obesity rather than those who are accustomed to the positive lifestyle from their parents.
In conclusion, it has to be a combined effort to ward off the menace of unhealthy eating habits as soon as possible. To do this, both school and parents have to coordinate and strive to be good models for children to follow. Parents continuously promote their youngsters to make healthy food choices while institutes guide them on how to enhance their health.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...th. According to many findings of the U.S researchers, children imitate their par...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...ents almost immediately or they reflect most of parents’ gestures and habits in other words. So...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19201995012 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94609248813 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548628428928 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8223421576 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.125 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370197508574 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121385423961 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807591107203 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240157649792 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655723858085 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...th. According to many findings of the U.S researchers, children imitate their par...
^
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...ents almost immediately or they reflect most of parents’ gestures and habits in other words. So...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19201995012 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94609248813 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548628428928 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8223421576 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.125 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370197508574 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121385423961 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807591107203 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240157649792 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655723858085 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.