You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. in your letter,
1). say what the problem is
2). describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
3). ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter in the hope that course provider can help me to solve the problem of accommodation.
My name is Harshit Munjal. i live in Haryana, India. I got the visa of Canada and went on study visa. I got the admission at Northern College, Toronto. I studied Business Accounting.
On June 27th, 2020, i arrived to this nation. I booked the room by a course provider before come to Canada. When i came to know about charges are $1,500 for single room that is out of my budget.
It is requested to course provider show me a little room than this that i can afford, my range expectation is between $700 and $800 that should be located near to my college so that i can reach easily to my college. I would be grateful if you arrange the cheapest accommodation with my conditions.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Your Faithfully,
Harshit Munjal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ge Toronto I studied Business Accounting On June 27th 2020 i arrived to this nati...
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...siness Accounting On June 27th 2020 i arrived to this nation I booked the roo...
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...rse provider before come to Canada When i came to know about charges are 1500 for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36419753086 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48133560163 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 162.0 16.3608247423 990% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 707.0 76.5299724578 924% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 162.0 16.8248392259 963% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 4.34317383033 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239718941995 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239718941995 0.0766984524023 313% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127335872182 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124602050883 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 80.1 8.37731958763 956% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -76.03 70.7449484536 -107% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 64.1 7.45979381443 859% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.5 7.59969072165 191% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.8 8.54432989691 782% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 8.15463917526 638% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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