Some scientist think that there are intelligent life from on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Othres think that it is bad idea and could be dangerous.
Discuss bothe views and give yu r opinion.
Some scientists contemeplate that they must do an initiative to contact with other living creatures on diffrenet planets wheres others criticise it saying that may prove dangreous. I believe that efforts can be made to communicate with other living forms because it may lead to new discovery which proves fruitful for mankind whereas there is an uncertainity that this human activity may be deemed as an attack by other creatures.
The scientists assume that developing a communication channel with creatures on other planets will represent fascinating facts such as humans are not the only living thing occupying the universe. They can make effort to learn how other living being survive on different planet, what technlogy they are using. As a result, from these finding, they can bring innovative ideas on other mother planet Earth to overcome commom issues such as cure of life thretaing diseases, exploitation of natural resources.
On the other hand, some spacemans assert that the living souls on other planet can also attack human beings assuming that they are sign of danger for them and aslo they may have more advanced technology than us. Moreover, some scientists think that years ago, spaceships have been spotted in different nations but till now they are not able to provide satisfactory comments on it,where it came from and where it vansihes. Hence, they think that if there is a life on other planet, they might have more advanced technology than us since we are not able to find traces of that.
To sum up what have discussed so far, space exploration proves beneficial to some extent when it comes to discovering something new, but it can also be proven dangerous beacsue of lack of facts of other life forms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: where's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93771626298 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5459698781 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 289.0 20.2975951904 1424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1427.0 106.682146367 1338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 289.0 20.7667163134 1392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239203592312 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239203592312 0.084324248473 284% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147617039917 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198908215736 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.3 13.0946893788 1117% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -221.86 50.2224549098 -442% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.0 11.3001002004 1027% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.8 8.58950901804 254% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.6 10.1190380762 1162% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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