The tables show the forecasted and actual sales of a bicycle shop over four months.
The given two tables illustrate a bicycle shop's targeted and achieved sales over the first four months of a year.
Overall, it can be seen that some categories performed well such as spare parts and repairs, while new bicycles and clothing did not meet the expectations. A new section has appeared in the third month, namely, bicycle hires.
While new bicycles had projected to increase month by month, they, in fact, decreased each month except for February. Likewise, clothing sales were expected to reach $6000 by April, it only achieved $3,220 - well below forecast.
In contrast, repairs exceeded their estimated sales as it was planned month on month from $2,590 to $3,780. Also, spare parts sales did remarkably well outperforming its forecast in January and March attaining an $800 and $260 increase.
In March and April, a new category of revenue stream was created that being bicycle hires this brought income of $850 and $1,160 in the final two months.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...each 6000 by April it only achieved 3220 well below forecast In contrast repai...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...chieved 3220 well below forecast In contrast repairs exceeded their estimated sales ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, likewise, so, third, well, while, except for, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35687160236 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 160.0 22.4926829268 711% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 784.0 112.824112599 695% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 160.0 22.9334400587 698% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 5.23603664747 1681% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331266830857 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.331266830857 0.103423049105 320% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191168716748 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125094539022 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 81.6 13.2329268293 617% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -74.0 61.2550243902 -121% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 63.3 10.3012195122 614% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.93 8.06136585366 185% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.0 10.9970731707 600% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 11.0658536585 488% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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