Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discus both these views and give your own opinion.
There are arguments about the fairness of fact that top sportsmen have a possibility to have a salary much higher than professionals from the other fields. Personally, I believe that it would be better if the government create possibilities for high salaries for both professionals in sport and other socially significant areas.
Sportsmen may have a bigger salary because they have a short career if compared with other professionals; besides, they are role models for millions of kids and adults from all other the world. In spite of the fact that to achieve a distinctive result in sport to start training from early ages is needed, professional sport is very traumatic that is why a career in sport is very short. Nevertheless, sportsmen play significant roles in society being a role model; they motivate people showing that nothing is possible if one decides to become a champion.
On the other hand, there are many crucial for society professions such as doctors, teachers, police officers, transport workers and others, who need to have a possibility to earn a fair amount of money for their work. There are no world wire famous professionals in these fields usually, although they may influence people in a less wide circle. For instance, there are many stories, which tell about teachers who changed one's kid mindset that became the turning point for his future life.
However, in my opinion, both in sport and social significant fields people need to have a possibility to get a good money for their work. I suppose, that it is a government, which should take a responsibility for building honest payment systems basing on social contribution.
To sum up, although people may vary in their opinions in regards with sportsmen’s salaries, I suppose that it will be wiser if professionals have as high salary as big their input for society is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, i suppose, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0064516129 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8543557091 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.4407460004 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156653178094 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663970233289 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388876340172 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936906735051 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171610227268 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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