More and More people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes, and
other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
In this day and age, people show propensity for having their own different kinds of renowned brands such as cars, clothes and other items. There are some reasons to be attributable to this tendency. I am of the opinion that this is really a negative trend.
On the one hand, There are a wide ranges of compelling reasons to explain why an increasing numbers of people have a desire to own well-known brands. Firstly, because it is likely to help them widen social networking sites with other people which having same level or social status. From that, it will facilitate easily for their business. For instance, Ly Nha Ky, she is not only one of the most famous stars in Viet Nam but also a successful business man all over the world thanks to having their own luxurious brands of clothes. She also had the chance to communicate and collaborate with the world’s leading stars.
Secondly, they might receive the respect from other people in the life through their wealth. Since when they own a high-end any type of item, to some extent it also express themselves to be rich. Therefore, others around them will have a distinct look from them and have a tendency to admire them instead of seeing them with dirty look.
On the other hand, this trend will leave some tremendous effects on society and individual. Firstly, there are some people who do not have enough money to own a famous item, they have to borrow a large amount of money from others such as friends or neighborhoods. This makes them go into debt and become a debtor. Besides, as they kept on pursuing the enthusiasm of having reputable brands, they will spend more time on building those items until they will feel they successful. As a result, they will gradually become isolated with their significant people like friends or family members. This is one of the negative things lead to weekend relationship bonds among people.
In conclusion, Although I have to admit that there are lots of reasonable reasons to understand that why people long to own famous brands, I think that it is not really a positive trend for people to pursue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'expresses'?
Suggestion: expresses
...ny type of item, to some extent it also express themselves to be rich. Therefore, other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7472826087 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44922293674 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9991134668 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312291182543 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988295889668 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711603908091 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193410135458 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990972051554 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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