Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding the dysfunctional rubbish collectors that are not working properly for almost three days and bring us some problematic issues.
To let you know about the location of our neighborhood is located on 24 east street. These dumping systems do not have empty spaces for our garbage since whatever we put in them will be gone out in an hour. since I am not really familiar with these systems I could just provide you with this extension of information.
As our neighborhood is not provided by any other garbage collecting systems it has been three days that people have put their wasting materials in front of their houses. In fact, trashes all around the houses swallow the beauty of our neighborhood and also trashes are smelly and it is not really healthy to breathe the air which is highly polluted with garbage.
I would appreciate it if the local council could take steps to tackle this problem. I think this problem is not something insolvable and people who have the expertise of repairing these systems can easily fix them. It would be great if you send one of your professional workers to iron out this difficulty.
For further inquiry, you could reach me via e-mail at hivafara90@gmail.com.
I am eager to earn your affirmative feedback.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ut in them will be gone out in an hour. since I am not really familiar with these sys...
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ut in them will be gone out in an hour. since I am not really familiar with these sys...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with this extension of information. As our neighborhood is not provided by any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, i think, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91592920354 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8315853021 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4824528993 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243154803165 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733626714756 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448451681831 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925343741724 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566391058457 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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