Today, many people want to get married and have children in their thirty rather than when they are young. Is it positive or negative development.
In new generation many individuals prefer to start their family life by getting married and having offspring at the age of thirty instead of in younger age. This is because people have more practical approach toward life to start family after settle down in his own life. This attitude have many positive aspects in population control and have better socio-economic status of family. In this essay we are going to describe some positive point of development about late marriages. On other side negative impacts are negligible when compared with its advantages.
If we look at negative or disadvantageous side of marriages after thirty years which mostly people want to do and many people prospective is having problems in latter life, is age gap between children and their parents. And its leads to difficulty in understanding each other because of major age difference between parental and next generation as a result indifferences in family. But this thing also seen in younger parents whose connection with their children is minimal because they are not financial stable and do more work to meet their both ends. This on thing can be solved by parents giving more attention and time to their children even they are older for example many children have great bond with their grandparents with two generation gap.
On the other hand advantages which enjoyed by people after their thirty year marriages are better place in society economically as they have stable way of living obtained by getting quality education and employment to bear his own and family expenditures. Such families are more happier and satisfied as compared to poorer one. Another thing which perhaps be positive is population control by having lesser number of offspring because reproduction cycle slower down with increase in age. And if family is small and have no financial issues then its better to brought up healthy generation with all facilities and rights to live.
In conclusion, consideration on a question about either wedding after thirty years of age have positive or negative effects that age which new generation preferred to married. If people get married in late young age then can develop satisfied and healthy offspring by giving them all facilities of life better food, home, their time and education with their better pays. While age gap difference can be parted by spending more time with family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...tle down in his own life. This attitude have many positive aspects in population con...
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Line 2, column 748, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gap' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'gaps'.
Suggestion: gaps
... their grandparents with two generation gap. On the other hand advantages which en...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... family expenditures. Such families are more happier and satisfied as compared to poorer one...
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Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e and education with their better pays. While age gap difference can be parted by spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while, another thing, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11195928753 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65885897381 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488549618321 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9308434362 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5625 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304000035857 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986844288857 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717681248491 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194836133733 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463553835367 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.