Childhood obesity has been regarded as a pressing issue in many nations in the last few years. This essay will state some main culprits and feasible measures of this problem.
There are a number of reasons that contribute to the rising levels of obesity among children. As a lot of youngsters choose to consume junk foods and sugar-based drinks rather than follow healthier eating habits in daily meals, this increases the risks of metabolic diseases including heart cancer and diabetes which will be a heavy burden for a country’s health care system. Another primary reason leading to children obesity is that young people nowadays tend to have a sedentary lifestyle. These people have a preference for watching TV, surfing on the Internet and playing video games rather than hanging out with their friends or engaging in sports.
Actions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the detrimental effects of obesity on children. Firstly, parents have a responsibility to control and ensure to limit unhealthy ingredients in children’s meal. Secondly, governments should offer financial support to schools to establish sporting facilities like basketball yards; therefore, students will be encouraged to partake in sports among other counterparts. Finally, it is necessary for schools of all ages to raise awareness amongst students about the detrimental effects of an imbalanced diet on one’s lives, so students can understand and avoid this habit.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that there are various factors leading to the increase in child obesity and measures should be implemented to tackle this issue.
- Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- People tend to work longer hours nowadays Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted Do you agree or disagree 78
- In some schools students must study music and learn to play a musical instrument In other schools studying music may not be required or there may be no music classes at all Do you think all students should have to study music Support your opinion with rea 78
- Some people store personal and private information online including banking contacts and addresses Is it a positive or negative trend 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34901960784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79213483137 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1532478187 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175375858818 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613005971408 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405514487851 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10958684025 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414969630347 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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