There are some motives for people to work. Some people think money is the most important, do you agree or disagree?
Someone has rightly said, "Money can buy you a great coach, but it can not buy you a sound sleep". There are numerous driving forces to follow their passion instead of getting lucrative pay. I completely agree with the statement and my justifications are provided in the ensuing paragraphs.
There are myriad reasons to believe that people are more inclined towards honing their skills. Firstly, the most conspicuous one is that each individual has their own peculiarity which can help them to sharpen their knowledge in the field of their interest. Furthermore, as being an expert in a particular field they can guide new freshers which in turn provides them more perks and incentives from the organization. As an epitome, the survey of fortune 500 companies was carried out by one of the prestigious University of Oxford, they revealed that roughly 80% of company's employees are mainly focused on their work because they are interested in it not because of the pay.
However, it is true that money can be a prominent reason to complete the job but at the same time some of the tasks involve a lot of work in other words following a hectic schedule can only be possible with their personal interest only. In addition to that, in a long run, people can get good experience which in turn can help to increase their wage.
In conclusion, doing a job or completing the task for either money or passion is completely depends upon the mindset of an individual. Whereas, according to my preference and understanding my reasons following their heart and sharpening their skills and knowledge in their work is well logically acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...o complete the job but at the same time some of the tasks involve a lot of work in other wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94945848375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8063617561 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1900542856 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125093485801 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456463071684 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330874163388 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754306701801 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204536910185 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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