Nowadays many people aim to create a balance between their work and other aspects of their life, however, only a few achieve it. What are the problems in doing this and what
solutions can you suggest?
In the present times, everyone is quite busy in there life and do not able ta get quality time for there family's; to solve this problem many try to stable there work and there personal life's l. In contrast a minority able to fullfill this. This essay will discuss why this happen and how can it be solved.
To start with, the reason why this situation occurs. First and foremost, hectic schedule; in this on going time every one is a part of a rat race and want to earn hug sum of money. In there prospective money hold more weightage than others thinks in the life. They do not take others aspect of life seriously. However, if they try to creat balance in there life's then, they find lack of motivation inorder to achive this target they find money more important; therefore, they focus in earning money than spending time with there near and dear ones or do something that they want to do. Thus, because of there preference they find difficult to creat steadiness in there living.
However, to tackle with this problem, there are some solution also. Firstly, individual should realise there main motive of main importance of life, they should they should rank there family higher than money or fame. Moreover, they should make a schedule regarding they work, how much they will work or how many hours they will spend with there family members or in. they definitely should not working for more over and even they should not spend to much time with there family's only if, they want to creat a great balance in there life's. Hence,by following this they can easily able tackle this problem.
In conclusion, in this modern world everybody life is unbalance due to there working habits and lack of dedication. constrastingly, to deal with this scenario, one should get some free time for there family and friends by making proper plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun try seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tries'.
Suggestion: many tries
...or there familys; to solve this problem many try to stable there work and there personal...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... and foremost, hectic schedule; in this on going time every one is a part of a rat race ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...h this problem, there are some solution also. Firstly, individual should realise the...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'they should'.
Suggestion: they should
...main motive of main importance of life, they should they should rank there family higher than money or ...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...mbers or in. they definitely should not working for more over and even they should not ...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ore over and even they should not spend to much time with there familys only if, t...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...at a great balance in there lifes. Hence,by following this they can easily able ta...
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Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e,by following this they can easily able tackle this problem. In conclusion, i...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Constrastingly
... working habits and lack of dedication. constrastingly, to deal with this scenario, one should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23645159264 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523219814241 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1166916644 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164814600211 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725309126336 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449589482221 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113204581872 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340175739385 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.