It is an issue of controversy over whether students should get access to higher education or not. While there are manifold benefits of working straight after graduation, I subscribe to the opinion that studying at university will do wonder for their career prospect.
On the one hand, pursuing a career right after school is supposed to be attractive for some justifications. Firstly, young people could embark on earning money on their own as soon as possible. Therefore, they are able to lead an independent life and even assist their parents to reduce the financial burden. Secondly, obtaining a job right after school creates a good condition for young people to accumulate down-to-earth experience and sharpen their exclusive skills. They might have stronger practical backgrounds than students who lack hands-on lessons at the university.
On the other hand, there is little room for doubt that higher education has an array of undeniable benefits. First, tertiary education will give students a chance to enrich their academic knowledge. Because they could derive a good understanding of their field from their top-notch professors at the university or college. Furthermore, students will derive an academic qualification from higher education, such as bachelor’s or master’s degree. Thanks to it, graduates are given a good opportunity to get a well-paid job with ease.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that the advantages of pursuing their occupation right after school are obvious, it is my contention that higher education is better for youngsters to get a good job in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3188976378 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96303983423 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8319388028 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176479842321 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606107239268 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576457556322 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117771963018 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417215424718 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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