Nowadays vast majority of people moving out to foreign countries for great amount of time either to obtain a job or for educational purposes. However relocating abroad has plethora of merits and demerits, which, I will mention in further paragraphs.
The most obvious advantage of studying or doing job in overseas is that many employers consider overseas experience a positive and enriching attribute for any employee. They believe that a person who has qualified or experienced from a reputed organization and university in developed country is capable of working in a diverse work space, and has the ability to adopt to change.
Secondly ,on a university campus or work place, people are not alone and they will encounter many more people from overseas and possible to make friend from all around the world. This is not just exciting social level but could lead to important overseas contacts in later professional life. Being alone in foreign country, makes students self dependent and independent in terms of solving issues and making important decisions that would turn influence in the their future.
Lastly, most rewarding benefits of graduating and working in abroad is people see the world through a new and exciting lens. living in in a new country not only allow for unique learning experience ,but also provides a cultural immersion opportunity like no other .nothing helps young learner understand the world around them better than spending time in shoes of others.
On the other hand, there are numerous challenges faced by students and people going abroad for higher education or work. The most difficult situation can be the cultural shock has to be faced. Everything is different ,which leads to the home sickness and loneliness. Secondly, The financial difficulties are always there student may have tough time to coping up with up with the part time job and the pressure of studies. In addition language barrier and finding place in community will be hard in the beginning.
In conclusion, any anxiety about going overseas for university study or job is certainly understandable, it is important to remember that the benefits offered by the experience make it well worthwhile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24089635854 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74550674371 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5778168326 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.733333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235929611356 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641273632325 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661063850714 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110149776906 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377074956581 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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