More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?
Opinions are divided on whether this attitude that dressing up in designer clothes is important should be considered as a positive or a negative trend. I believe that the latter is the case, and wearing such dresses is more of a luxury than a necessity.
Although it is widely held belief that fashionable style of dress is essential to keep oneself up with the Joneses, in practice, this does not apply to everyone. Evidence for this can be seen in the fact that such outfits are quite expensive and cost a fortune to someone who belongs to a middle-class family. People belonging to these families would run into debts if they squander their money on buying such fancy apparels, which would have an adverse effect on their dependents. Another reason for fashionable dresses being less beneficial to certain people could be because these dresses outdate every next year and trends keep on changing, which means that this phenomenon of giving so much value to these type of clothes does not have long-term benefits, and not everyone would prefer to buy these for being a luxury item.
In fact, far from being a valuable, fashionable sense of dressing is a negative development for the reasons related to acceptability and comfortability. With regard to the former, designer garments are not widely accepted, especially at work, as well as at religious places. The expectation there is to dress up sensibly, and sometimes entry is prohibited with an inappropriate style of dress, which could be embarrassing at times. As far as comfortability is concerned, most of the lavish dresses are designed specifically to tailor the needs of celebrities to wear on special occasions and carrying those clothes on a regular basis by ordinary people would be uncomfortable. For these reasons, the importance to wear trendy clothes is a negative attitude.
In conclusion, instead of being a need, fashionable clothing is a part of a luxurious lifestyle. Having said that, this notion that it is important to wear fashionable clothes is a negative development, as it is not suited for everyone on every occasion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04584527221 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93286316716 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5699791962 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.461538462 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276003211222 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112698140609 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095701128772 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212486422913 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918512643769 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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